Let me help you with your craft! I have 17+ years of writing experience and several years of critiquing. I will provide helpful feedback along with suggestions on how to improve your story. My comments will address any issues in the following: plot, characters, dialogue, structure, tension, title, language and more.
Does your opening grab the reader? Is your ending satisfying? Have you used too much telling? I can help.
Here's what writers have said about my critiques:
"Great feedback! So detailed!! Thank you! It's very much appreciated, and it all makes perfect sense!"
"Thank you for your very detailed, very helpful critique. I appreciate your recommendations more than words can say. I am excited to dive deep and work on this. You're a fabulous critiquer." --Annemarie G.
"I am pleased you were able to return it to me quickly. Your observations, suggestions, and strategies all make sense to me. I plan to revise and polish my work, and I would very much like to have you critique it again." --Kevin R. "I had a critique from Rosie Pova this year, and I can highly recommend her!" --Lauri M. "Thanks for the fun and clever help @RosiePOVwith my latest picture book." --Jany C.
"Thank you for the great feedback and fun ideas." --Jany C.
Click on "Contact" in the menu bar to get in touch. Critiques start at $250 for a fiction, non-rhyming PB up to 700 words. 30-min phone consultation: $150 Best value: Critique + Call combo: $300
You'll gain more clarity and have a solid plan of action to improve your story. Let's work together. I look forward to hearing from you!
Also, check out my online writing courses and mentorship opportunity for picture book writers HERE