Let me help you with your craft. I have 14 years of writing experience and several years of critiquing. I will provide helpful feedback along with suggestions on how to improve your story. My comments will address any issues in the following: plot, characters, dialogue, structure, tension, title, language and more.
Does your opening grab the reader? Is your ending satisfying? Have you used too much telling? I can help.
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(Critiques start at $65 for a fiction, non-rhyming PB up to 700 words.)
You'll gain more clarity and a plan of action to improve your story. Let's work together. I look forward to hearing from you!