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Classic Picture Book Structure: Easy Breakdown

9/18/2017

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If the classic picture book structure is your favorite and you want to stick with it, make sure you hit all the important points when drafting your story. Here's an easy model to follow – apply it to your manuscript spread by spread, find what's missing or where your pace is disturbed, then modify, mold, and master!
 
[For a 32-page picture book, you'll have fourteen spreads in which to fit your story.]
 
1. Introduce your main character (MC) and show us something interesting or special about him/her: skills, quirks, relationships etc. This is also where you set the expectation of tone, type of story, and voice.
 
2. Establish the MC's normal world. What's the setting? Does the setting play a special role in your story?
 
3. Develop MC even further. What does he/she want? You might introduce a secondary character.
 
4. Inciting incident: something happens that disturbs the "normal" and prompts the MC to take action. The MC needs to do something about it, either to restore the balance or to take a step toward their goal/desire that they've had at the beginning.
 
5. First try: MC fails and the situation gets worse. This failure also brings a little change in him/her. It helps the MC learn more about the world or himself.
 
6. Second try: MC fails again. Tension escalates. MC has a bit of a different perspective. He learns something from this failure, too.
 
7. Third try: MC fails once again. This time it seems like all is lost and there's no way out of the mess.
 
8. MC reflects on the situation and contemplates his next move. MC gets past the defeat, finds hope, and the motivation to try again.
 
9. MC gathers his/her strength and skills learned from previous experience and makes a decision to solve his/her problem in a different way.
 
10. The preparation: does the MC need to gather supplies, resources or dig deeper to ensure success this time?
 
11. Final battle. The MC makes the biggest effort here, using all of his/her previous lessons learned and new resources.
 
12. MC wins! He/she solves the problem. You can use a twist, a surprise, or a clever solution here. The most important thing is that no one else solves the problem for your MC. It should not feel like a coincidence, either. The more original this part is, the more of the "golden factor" your book will have. Don't use the first idea that comes to mind. Search further and think outside-the-box.
 
13. A satisfying ending. MC might not get exactly what he/she wanted, but what they need. Tie it back to the beginning.
 
14. MC is changed as a result of his journey. Show the "new normal" for your MC with a hint of what the future might look like for them. Finish on a positive, hopeful or humorous note, depending on the tone and type of story. Make sure it matches what you've established for the story's world from the get-go.
 
That's it! There's some wiggle room here and there, but overall this model should give you some guidance on how to develop your classic structured picture book.
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This is only the frame to get you started with your draft. As for the rest of the elements that make for a great picture book, like an original idea, vocabulary, voice, literary devices, imagery, page turns, illustration potential etc., those are subject to future posts.
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Happy creating!

Leave a comment and share your biggest challenges, advice or thoughts on crafting your classic structured picture book.
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9 Comments
Kaye Baillie
9/18/2017 06:16:34 pm

Thanks for this Rosie. Honestly, I've been writing and studying the craft of picture books for over a decade, but I find that the '3' attempts by the MC to overcome their problem is not a strong point for me. I tend to have the three attempts, but because they are interchangeable, I know I don't have it right. Your description has given me a better insight into how to make each attempt have a rightful place and therefore builds towards the resolution. Thanks for sharing this great list.

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Rosie Pova link
10/22/2017 07:01:52 pm

Kaye, it might take a little practice, but you'll get there. Just keep in mind that the three attempts can't be of the same difficultly -- the obstacles need to increase -- in order for the tension to escalate. Also, there's action and reaction, so every time your protagonist fails, things get worse and worse. Brainstorm and ask lots of questions :) Thanks for stopping by.

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Dea Lenihan link
9/20/2017 06:53:30 pm

Thanks so much for this.
It is great that you broke it down into simple compartments for us!
Much appreciated.
Dea xo

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Rosie Pova
10/22/2017 07:03:34 pm

Glad it was helpful to you, Dea :)

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Kristine link
10/20/2017 08:15:10 am

Lovely breakdown! I'm going to go through my manuscript and ask these questions to make sure I get a better flow.

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Rosie Pova link
10/22/2017 07:06:51 pm

Thanks for stopping by, Kristine, and good luck -- hope it works great for your story :)

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Ingrid Boydston
10/22/2017 06:50:11 pm

You distilled information from about 3 seminars in one great post! So useful! Many thanks!

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Rosie Pova link
10/22/2017 07:08:35 pm

Thanks, Ingrid! I'm happy it was helpful :)

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Melissa Stoller link
10/23/2017 08:57:03 pm

Excellent post, Rosie! This one is a keeper!

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    ​Rosie J. Pova is a prolific children's writer, a wife and a mother of three.

    Ever since childhood, Rosie has had a passion for writing and has been fascinated with the power of words. She has written essays, short stories and poetry in Bulgarian and French as a young girl, but as a grown-up, her writing gave way to family, jobs and just life. Until 2004, when she revisited her love for story-making, a few years after becoming a mom.

    Rosie is originally from Bulgaria now living in Texas with her husband and three kids. She writes primarily for children of all age groups, as well as poetry. 

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